Yul pushed her head into the pillow, impaled into a sea of silk clad down by the urgent tumidity of her laboring cowhand. As shell into smooth-bore, wall gloving swell, warmth engulfing taut, tight, turgid heat, rotation pulled and thrust replied. "Baby," exhaled Yul, between lips (Taylor Swiftish) parted and head turned as swimmer in mid-stroke, "see what you'd be missing if I didn't come."
Rog grunted, hands on her curved rotation. Yul dipped her shoulder in reach, a pearl to twirl.
"Baby, bless my hide."
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ed note: If Yul had sung on karaoke night, this is what she would have sung to Rog:
Sugarland's Stay
26 comments:
her labouring cowhand, you got me good and proper on just those three words, oh my. Very, very nice piece of writing, nice to see Yul having her head pushed into the pillow as she was wishing for so recently, hot, hot, hot goes the song, tight, taught, turgid goes the Poppet, nice alliteration, short and tight and it emphasizes the happenings and movement within the chapter. Very clever how you did this! The swimmer in mid-stroke simile is a great example of one of your many special talents when it comes to your writing, your ability to tell it like it is, simply, directly, just with these few words, the image of Yul is complete and clear. Smart girl is our Yul, all is fair in love and war as they say and she is certainly not, and bless her for it, the type to deny herself any and all means at her disposal to get what she wants. One could break this up in groups of two words and three and fall for each. Bless your hide for phrases like pearl to twirl and thrust replied. Scrumptious!
Well, I was in the shower, warm water cascading down upon my agent of masculine surrender [censored] and, well, this chapter kinda just popped into my mind. So, after getting dressed, as I was writing this snippet of a chapter, the TV was on GAC and a Taylor Swift music video came on--(I think it was Our Song)--and toward the end there is a close up view of her lips. See those lips and that is what Yul's looked like with starlight glistening in the moment. :-D
Hmm, well, Jen wuz here (blushing).
Jen, blushing is allowed and encouraged, among other things. :-D
Just casually mentioned to Hubby that maybe the kids could to his parents this evening to visit. He just doesn't even know what storms are brewing and coming his way. Yes, blushing can be very good. Jen
Oh Jen, don't get my imagination working overtime like that. And to think, I'll be on an airplane for almost four hours. :-D
Hasn't flying been very inspirational for you in the past? ;D Be safe and have a good trip. Been wondering about your Grandmother by the way....
Jen, thanks for asking. My grandmother's status hasn't changed. We are still day to day.
As for flying, well, depending on who is sitting next to me, well, quite a few chapters have been conceived at 30,000 feet. :-D
Wow, I still remember those dark copper nails. I could have been arrested for my thoughts alone. Somewhere in this story is that chapter. :-D
The fractual would make a lovely brooch ;)
Hey you,
Prepare yourself...
Look what I found.
Marshmellow by way of it being the after what came before for starters, it is back to basics (in the words of Tony Blair) and I could just smother him in kisses for it in it's entirety. Loved this forever in an instant. Oh, and here is the bear hug you will need after watching, if you don't need one, I would sure appreciate one anyway. ;*)
To top it all off, who'd have thought, there it is after years of searching, the backdrop to my walls.
Missing you like you sneaked out during the night and the morning sun has illuminated the space where you should be. Take good care of you, H
Miladysa, I wouldn't disagree with you. :-)
Sweetest, now that is the James we remember. Now if we can just get him to remake Same Mistake--he's redone videos before. We can always hope. :-)
Excellent find. Thanks for sharing. :-)
For those that might want a little more Yul and Rog, this chapter might be of interest: Ripe
Wow... just wow... I'm lost for words this time!
You're posts are short but so powerful. The images you used reflet the mood of your writing. I love it xx
I just want to say that I haven't been able to really read much of the story, but the pictures are AMAZING!!
Cléa, you are a woman of words. You can do better than that. Otherwise, I'll have to put you over my knee and bless your hide like a plaid pleated school girl. ;-)
Thank you Elise. Sometimes I just want to get the heart of a matter and cut out all the trappings. In this chapter, I just needed that one visual, of Yul on her hands and knees, arse in the air, head in the pillow, lips slightly parted and her laboring cowhand at the tiller. :-D
As always, thanks for taking the time to leave a kind word. :-)
Fashionista, no worries. The images are, I hope, blog worthy on their own and the story is not for everyone, so I'd say, come back for the images. I try and post an original image with each chapter so there is always something to see as well as read. Thanks for stopping by and hope to see you again. :-)
Oh, and your kind words are most appreciated. :-)
Well, I was going to say what a beautiful pearl, and it would look lovely as a pearl necklace. But you don't believe me, do you... because the words have twirled this time.
Cléa, you're right. ;-)
I love pearl necklaces!
But, we'd have to turn Yul over for that.
You turn. I'll aim. Deal? :-D
I loved the fractual. There is a pearl that is so delicate, so succulent, so precious, so... *fans self*
Yes, SO.
:-D
Let me know if you need some help with the fanning. I can be rather creative. :-)
:D I'll bet you could!
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