Wednesday, November 29, 2006

202. Grace and Beauty

Golden amsec stood smooth as morning lakes in the glittering basins of crystal flutes, reflecting smiles white as Christmas snow. John, dressed in his captain’s whites, lifted his glass and proposed a toast. “To our guest, the elegant lady Kyra, a sight most glorious in her singular grace and beauty.”

Hear, Hear resounded round the table as glasses chimed like church bells, echoes softened in the warmness of welcomed endearments. Kyra’s eyes welled as John’s words rained down upon her refulgent blue eyes. Instinctively, she leaned her head back to hold the tide and inhaled deeply, to stay a sniffle or calm her racing breath could not be said. Nor did it matter. Words, amsec, or perhaps something else, magic was magic and these moments were few and far between. Questions, she checked at the door; to be picked up later, if need be.

Together they raised flutes of golden fruit and she smiled. Not so much at him, as with him, like children on a merry-go-round going up and down and all around to the measure of laughter unencumbered by the gravity of age. And he smiled back in a gesture understood only by two in the discourse of the moment. Others were there, that night, at dinner. So the log testifies. But then again, they may as well been the trees in the forest or the birds overhead.

The table stood resplendent with the bounty of private reserves and select delicacies prepared by hand and arranged on whey linens shipboard smooth. Much came from the prowess of John’s own hands on his ancestral lands. Pure and natural, he would say, but truth be known, he needed the bond to home on these long journeys. Although John would not admit it at the time, he had advised the kitchen, in so many words, to spare no detail this night.

Not since formal Tao dinners with Papa had Kyra seen such care and attention given to an event, giving pause to reflection both melancholy and grateful. Much was eaten; much was said, little remembered. Conversation flowed from loose lips but the eyes alone rendered currency legit, a private duet waltzing to the beat of attentive hearts. Kyra wore her ruby red metalique evening gown that night and she feared the pounding in her chest would betray her longing in glimmering swells of rising metal and flickering light. John wondered how a woman could appear more gorgeous.

Kyra tried not to look, but how could one not stare at his dark brown puppy dog eyes. Somewhere was the sound of water flowing, or perhaps, she thought, just the desire to pour herself into those bottomless pools of reflected admiration, forever slipping deeper and deeper into his intoxicating charisma. She leaned his way in her reserved sultriness, almost daring him to break eye contact, a tacit dare, understood in the curve of a smile. Dessert came and then after-dinner liqueurs of azure blues and emerald greens, exotic on the tongue, familiar in the belly.

John made eye contact with his regular guests and one by one they offered their thanks and excused themselves from the table. Kyra noticed without noticing until just the two remained. (to be continued)

Categories: Story, Kyra, John Discovery

44 comments:

Trée said...

This chapter will have a preamble, which is to say, there is a chapter that will be written that explains how we got to this point; and, as implied, this chapter will continue.

Sorry if this one confuses anyone, I just like writing these things slightly out of order, to set the stage and anticipation for "how did we get here."

Anonymous said...

Sounds wonderful to me!

I've missed so much here, I'm to catch up with all your entries. But your Fracs just blow me away!

heheh. I'm back sweetie! I'm in recovery mode for now ;-)

Autumn Storm said...

Welcome home Leigh. :-)

Poppet, you do well in doing so, nothing quite like anticipation and I quite simply don't know just how I am going to be able to think about anything else but this chapter and what exactly went before and what might come after! Events aside for now, I just have to tell you once again, how I love the way you write. As so many other times before, I can pick out singular words that just edge it out there to something special, but more than that it's certain expressions and your metaphors and such like, though I've heard you say things, I just love the sometimes flabouyant (sp?) and always vivid flavour that they have.
What I like best about chapters such as these is that I so easily picture the scene from your words, I can imagine the looks, I even imagine what isn't there. :-D In any case, it's all down to how brilliant, in every sense of that word, they are.

Hope your well, xo

Trée said...

Leigh, so good to have you back in-country. From the look of your first couple postings, seems like you had the time of your life. Can't wait to see those gorgeous pics and hear more and more about every little detail. Welcome home. I'll get the sangria. :-D

Trée said...

Sunshine, this is another airplane chapter, as will the ones that come before this and the ones the come after. I literally wrote the outlines to about five chapters on the four hour flight.

I think we will see at least two chapters that set the stage for this one and at least one that occurs as they leave the dinning room and head down the hall to her quarters. Such a gentleman, walking her back and all. Just makes your heart go all soft and everything.

Of course, keep this in mind, it is still not to late for me to slap a dream label on this one, although that is not my plan. I have a couple wicked little twists that set this one up so I think it is going to stay in "real time."

As always my dear, your kind words are welcomed like ice-cold lemonade on a hot summer day of yard work. :-)

Anonymous said...

Autumn, Thank you so much!

Mr T! I can't even begin to describe the journey I've had, it was so amazing and I was so blessed to be part of such a wonderful group of like minded people. We've raised £93k so far! (and I'm still in a daze!)

Catching up with your entries! ;-)

Trée said...

Leigh, that is so good to hear. I know you planned and waited so long to make this trip a reality and to hear the first reports that it was everything you had hoped it would be makes me very, very happy and waiting with great anticipation as you roll out post after post regaling us with your splendid adventures and insights and friendships and photos.

As for the story, when you get to "Frail Me" you might want to read that one when you are alone. The content is a little more "suggestive" than most of my stuff. :-D

Autumn Storm said...

Leigh, I wanted to wish you a good trip on your blog back then, but had trouble commenting. Same thing occured today, wanted to welcome you back and congratulate you, and just plain giggle at that 2nd post. :-D
It was quite obviously an amazing experience and the figure you have quoted here is something to be greatly proud of and then some!
Looking forward to seeing the pictures. :-)

Autumn Storm said...

Makes sense, nothing else to do and they just bubble out of you. Like molten lava, you burst with creativity, new plots and twists to the story-line. :-)

Have to go, I'll reply properly to this, etc, next time I'm in.

xoxo

Trée said...

Meg, you can be sassy with me anytime. In fact, I kinda like it when you show your sassy-ness. :-D

Thanks for the feedback. I like writing chapters like this the most, the ones that paint a picture of a moment, of trying to describe a thought or emotion in ways words were not meant to do. That you like these chapters too pleases me very much. As always, my dear sassy one, your kind words are very much appreciated. :-)

Trée said...

Oh Sunshine. :-)

You do know how to make the whole gang smile. :-)

Keshi said...

I came for that opened gift and I found grace n beauty here...how magical! Huggggz Tre :)

**Kyra tried not to look, but how could one not stare at his dark brown puppy dog eyes.

Kyra seems to know my preferences too! haha!


Keshi.

Stargazer said...

I absolutely love this fractal. The colors are so perfect. It's so festive and 'seasonal'. It enhances this wonderfully descriptive chapter.

Autumn Storm said...

Agree completely with stargazer's observances on the fractal, the reference to snow in one of the first sentences tied it in firmly to that sort of theme.

Knowing you wrote the chapter about Yul (long as the original was) and now this and others on a relatively short trip, :-), you must be oblivious to all that is going on around, scribbling away (typing) intent and involved and away.
More tomorrow, I'm sure. :-)

Yes, very gentlemanly, if that's where it ends of course (or thereabouts anyhow:), and it will, I have every confidence in John. :-) That said, wicked twists could mean any number of things that I could think of, and any number of things I couldn't even imagine what might be. One thing is for certain, as with the killing off of Kieran, as with Yul and Trevor's evening, as with Yul's recent chapters, as with at least a dozen other things, it's all as it should be in the end.

Safe, pleasant, creative journey home, & I hope you have a lovely Friday and weekend, x

Trée said...

Keshi, the gift has always been there for you and always will be. Just close your eyes and open your heart. :-)

Trée said...

Thanks Deb. I think you've captured the ambiance of the room, although John does not have it decorated in holiday garb, the feeling, esp between John and Kyra is one imbued with a holiday spirit. Thanks so much for the kind words, which are always very much appreciated. :-)

Kel-Bell said...

Your fractles are like Godiva Chocolates for the soul.

Trée said...

Oh Sunshine, I just can't get anything past you anymore since our discussions on the chapter "Seasons."

I could have used any reference to white, but Christmas snow was used for several reasons. First, as Deb has alluded to, a sense of holiday spirit. Second, because Christmas is often associated with the innocence of childhood (think Liebe Ist and my favorite stanza) I wanted to create a sense of two children at play (again, the reference to the merry-fo-round to further drive home this theme). Both John and Kyra are what I would call "pure of heart." Neither would, without some wicked influence be acting the way they are acting in this scene. So, either this is a dream, or something else is at play. So, the snow sets up the idea of pure childlike innocence, with a playfulness associated with the anticipation of Christmas morning.

As for the plane, it is hard to explain. I usually start reading, often with my iPod playing through my ear buds and before long the ideas just start flowing like melting snow; so I pull out my notebook and just start jotting down ideas and it seems one idea gives birth to two more and so on. I actually wrote the outline for another one of Emy's letters too, which I have no idea when we might see that, but it is a very interesting concept she is playing with, like Seasons, in this letter to be written.

As always, my dear sweetest one, I could talk for days about this chapter and other references and so forth, but duty calls, as does coffee. Have a wonderful weekend if I don't see you around. Hugs and kisses. :-)

Trée said...

Oh Kel, no one says so much in so little words as you do my dear. Now that is my kind of woman! (just kidding to anyone who might have taken offense to that last thought, well, at least kinda kidding.).

As always Kel, so good to see you around. Your kind words are always welcomed and deeply appreciated. :-)

Trée said...

I'm sorry, what did you say? I saw playmate and roll and my mind went to mush. :-D

Have a great weekend Meg and try and keep warm. I'm off to practice my snow rolling skills.

Anonymous said...

Just wanted to post something to Autumn here, hope you don't mind Tree.

Autumn, thank you so much! Sorry you couldn't comment on my blog it's got some problems right now and it's being fixed, so I may have to wait to make some of my entries.

Still, the whole event was a pure dreamy experience and the emotion of bonding with people in that manner is something I'l never forget.

Thank you for showing me your support prior to my leaving and cycling so far. *hugs*

Tree, Hope you have a lovely weekend, sweetie! Thank you for letting me "speak" to autumn here.

*big hug*
:-)

"ME" Liz Strauss said...

How you could, in a matter of a few words about another time and another galaxy, make me nostalgic for Christmas feelings and the folks and traditions that go with them is a wonder.

The fractal is the icing on the cookies my mom used to bake. It's the starry sky at night Christmas Eve wondering about presents. It's the puppy love of a Christmas week date.

Trée said...

Leigh, no worries. Glad to be of service. And glad to have you back home. I head back home myself today. :-)

Trée said...

Morning Liz. Always so good to see you stopping by and your cookies nourish my soul in ways few do. I do appreciate your very kind words. Have a great weekend. :-)

Autumn Storm said...

Leigh, hope you get it sorted soon, so that we can see some of those pictures you have taken. In relation to commenting, it could just be me, not sure why, but I have had trouble posting comments on two other sites besides yours. In any case, I shall persist until I succeed. So, more later. :-)
Happy Sunday!

To you too, Poppet, hope you had a good journey back home, xo

Trée said...

Safe and sound Sweetest. Thanks for asking. :-)

Karen said...

I'm not confused but had a feeling you were building up to a cliff hanger with many unanswered questions. You do like to tease us... ;-)

I hope you and Jack have had a wonderful weekend. HUGS & KISSES to both of you ;-)

Trée said...

Karen, I do enjoy the tease, the anticipation of things to come, to let the imagination play in the fertile soil of possibility. We will see at least two chapters that precede this one. The first chapter takes place in John's office (update on planet and invite). The second chapter will take place in Kyra's quarters as she prepares for the dinner. Then, of course, there is the chapter that picks up from where they are now.

As always, thanks for following the story and always leaving me and Jack a few kind words. :-)

SaffronSaris said...

You changed your masthead! (I just came back) and it's totally cool.
I like the neocounter too, it's got snowflakes falling, pretty pretty.

Trée said...

Thanks Saffy. I did put an image on the masthead. I've also started a DT blog on Wordpress that has a little different look, which I think I will change from time to time. Same story and same images, just a quiet place for me to put the story and play with themes and layouts.

I kinda like that neocounter too. :-)

Keshi said...

Mwah Tre!

;-)
Keshi.

Anonymous said...

a private duet waltzing to the beat of attentive hearts?
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The expression is just "indescribable " [words fail sometimes]
:)

just a regular anon

Trée said...

Anon, thanks for those kind words. I was trying, with this passage, which I wrote and rewrote several times, to somehow, someway, maybe just possibly, paint the picture of communication occurring with the eyes rather than the lips. I wanted to convey the emotional urgency and alertness that occasions a first date with someone who swoons you. In that case, I believe, words take a back seat, are carefully chosen not to offend (or fumble the ball) but it is the eyes that take charge, looking for every nuance of body language (which, unlike words does not lie). The eyes hold a power to touch in ways the fingers can never achieve, for although the fingers can relieve an itch of the body, the eyes can scratch the itch within our souls, as silently as a laser.

The idea with the duet is to indicate that both sets of eyes are engaging the other, both hearts are attentive to the beat of passion and desire tinged with a nervousness as the signals from the eyes and the body slowly come in and are deciphered. So they dance with glances quick and light and sometimes bold and deep. Admiration is indeed reflected in those pools of longing with angles for one but seen by all.

Trée said...

Keshi, :-)

Agnes said...

Ahhhh...I just love to drop in and look at the pretty pictures. :D
Hugs sweetie. I hope you're well.
Wishing you joyful, fun, holiday moods.

Trée said...

Always good to see you around Aggie. Wishing you all the best too. :-)

Karen said...

Teases can be fun... ;-)

I'm here to catch up!

Trée said...

I'm on my back, belly up. Tease away. I've got all night and so does Jack. :-D

Karen said...

Ohhhh, tempt me, why don't you?! Sounds like Jack needs some attention...

Trée said...

Karen, that is the understatement of the year. :-D

Jack says bring it on, if you think you can handle it. :-D

Karen said...

I'll leave it up to you and Jack... I always love a challenge.

Trée said...

Two words, or so says Jack: Warm Hands. :-D

Karen said...

Warm hands, check! ;-)

Autumn Storm said...

November was an a*mazing month. To read each chapter as it comes, one knows of course that what one is seeing is genius, but though the last lingers into the next and they all linger always to some extent or another, taking links back month by month makes one acutely aware of how much, how many incredibly wonderful chapters one single month can hold.
I'm sure that you are able to remember chapters by title and so using this month as an example I would ask you just to remind yourself with the list of titles and you will know, I'm sure, in doing so what an impact just one of 23 months had. (Any of the other months would serve well as an example too.)
These last many chapters were so good that I need to allow them to settle first, so good that all I can say, at least for now, is WOW.

Just one excerpt from this page, one of many that I feel the want to memorize so that I can 'read' them wherever I am.
the eyes often conspire with the mind to deceive. I won’t deny his record of events has a literal truth, but like the calm surface of an unknown lake, what lies beneath is often a different matter. To see and to be, two different matters I say. So, let him have his truth if it fulfills a need only he can feel. Who am I to deny him the satisfaction of his view? For all I know, truth may lie more with his view than my own. Either way, his story or mine, at the end, just two stories, neither but a reflection of the myriad mirrors of our minds, distorted by time and distance, by desire and agenda, by past and future.
See(?)!

You are an amazing writer. So simple a sentence, so much meaning and feeling behind it.