fiction, poems and other general flirtatious happenings
Friday, February 27, 2009
Haunted by the Wool
we are all layers in the winter of life haunted by the wool as the wind plays fife and Dark trees conspire their branches in cavorts owls hooting too hiding in their forts so walk with me my child beside the path of water flowers wave our way fearful of the slaughter
I absolutely love this, a gorgeous piece of writing, so much so I don't know what words to use to tell you just how direct this is, concise yet expansive, such care in choice Dark trees conspire, vivid, telling wording, ambience descending like mist, seen, breathed, encountered, surrounding. Hardy-ish in its brilliance.
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I absolutely love this, a gorgeous piece of writing, so much so I don't know what words to use to tell you just how direct this is, concise yet expansive, such care in choice Dark trees conspire, vivid, telling wording, ambience descending like mist, seen, breathed, encountered, surrounding. Hardy-ish in its brilliance.
Am totally wowed.
Thank you Ms Storm. Your comments never fail to make me smile, a commodity worthy of trade along with a few free hugs. :-D
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