Six Shots Silver
Sunrise Tequila
Charcoal Stress
Stone Sober Still
Grenadine Drops
Like Lava
Lamps
Red into Gold
My little
Pomegranate yolk
Florida to Mexico
California Champagne
Pint Pulled Umbrella
Sans Rain
Sentinel Straw
Corrugated neck
Conduit seas
that warm breeze
Pretty Please
2 comments:
Utterly delectable composition, I almost dribbled all over the first lines, tongue-twisting to mould and mouth the utterances. Love the second stanza of lava lamps and red into gold, of liquid warmth, shaping, changing, absorbing in the same way as the gentle rush of warm ocean over warm sand, the desire to be lulled, away from the soberness of current surroundings, away from the seasons and weather of now, transported, to the warm goblets of red and gold. Lush in imagery, lush in language (sound), six shots silver produced gold.
Well, you should have been there. :-D
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