Tuesday, June 17, 2008

523. Her Patroon




ed note: Kyra has returned and the crew has sought a reprieve on the Arc'teryxian world of Polaris. Trev and Em headed to a small seaside village, staying in a cottage just outside of town.


He slowed to match her pace, indulging the natural feel of cobbles worn in foot and aged buttery smooth in history, each stone perfectly imperfect in the charm of time when hand and hammer mattered. Her feet were smaller than his but smaller in proportion and they seemed to be just right, skin olive tanned, arches firm in curve. The breeze coming off the azure ocean was neither cool nor warm as much as clean and pure and her long dark hair fanned in the way young hair, rich and supple, dances in the wind, tickling his shoulder. He thought it was nice to walk so close, not by necessity but by choice, her fingers twined in his. She had chosen the lacing and chosen the closeness and she smelled of lilac with a hint of rosemary, part scent and part memory of sighs and caresses under the clear cascading flow of shower rain.

The village on the hill overlooking the sea curved and twisted to match the mountainside and where stone and mortar ended and rock and shale begin were as blended as the strokes of Rembrandt. Each hut and structure fit into the other, a family of russet roofs presiding over open doorways as brothers and sisters, bustling with goods and little feet. The sun, refulgent, shone but not too hot and the shingles of clay glittered as the sea that lay before. Smiles were as lanterns in the shadows and leathered hands placed the sacrifice of the soil alongside the bounty from the sea.

She held up a vine of purpure grapes, and to the eye they appeared as jewels glinting like amethyst and she as a princess worthy of oil and brush. He looked not at her but at the others and in the looking smiled, for they looked as he had once looked and as he would look again, the kind of looking that made one pinch perchance it all but a dream. They would dine for two in the coming dusk and she would cook as if it were their last meal and he would eat as if sitting on the edge of a cliff, not of clay, but of slippery time, falling and falling forever deeper.

Rendered coin traveled upon the counter patron scarred, their purchase satcheled in woven whey bags. They walked among the artisan wares, legs touching as if the slightest separation was a sin against love. As a plant takes energy from the sun, they fed off the light of each other, standing taller when together, smiling more often and laughing as children laugh for the prism of their day held neither grays nor blacks but the spectrum of joy and hope and love and an endless flow of endearments evidenced not in words but in touches and looks and nudges and of hands in the back jeans pocket of the other.

Her arm rode his waist as braided rope mooring her patroon. The shops were full as is wont on days of sun and skies of blue where the dulcet hymn of birds heralded church bells ringing the noon. Just in a nook, a small restaurant, outdoor seating facing the sea, appeared with the matador wave of the chef's hand, their path lighted by his warm smile. A table for lovers, linens white and utensils silver before goblets homed with red fruit. Somewhere the sounds of pots and pans clanked and latin voices susurrated forth on the aroma of dishes handed down from generation to generation, tongue to ear and hand to eye. They nooned without prink or preen, silver upon china clinking a cappella notes of murmured satisfaction.

Bellies repleat in comport of desserts not denied. Wine judged by tongues quite divine as fingers found their kin beneath the shade of tyne. Commerce exchanged and promises endeared, a return requested with a smile and a hug.Thus was the first day of Trev and Em in town.

12 comments:

Autumn Storm said...

You romantic you. :-)
Gosh, but this was lovely. More lovely for each time that I have read it, which though this is the first chance that I have had to actually tell you so, I have done a fair number of times already and what's more am expecting to do so many, many more times. You've such an innate talent for creating a mood within your writing, sometimes in a flash of a single utterance, sometimes as is the case here as gently as a lullaby. Your writing requires slow reading, a savouring, and each time a turn of phrase delights as much as to cite a first the one about the cobbles, it feels so deserving of celebration also, for language, for talent, for the past and for the future. Such a exquisitely charming piece, a toast to the possibilities of grouping words, so rare to hear in this day and age in the form of prose evoking all the more thankfulness that there you are and that here we are. I cannot quite explain the thrill, the silk-drawn-across-the-skin type of pleasure that it is to read something this lovely. Mood, to go back, and how you not only create it but seem to surround the reader, this reader at least, on those two levels, the conclusion and the supremely skilful way in which it arrived. I remember reading a love scene once, where as she stood before the mirror he applied scent to her skin, her shoulders, the small of her back, behind her knees, and so it continued until she stood completely encircled in the aroma, much more passionate and beautiful a scene that I have described here, albeit still somewhat cliché :-D, but what I wanted to say, in my roundabout way, is that the sights become memory, the sounds are felt, it is seen and heard and touched and felt and loved and remembered and celebrated and more. Testament to the furthest capabilities and sentences such as cobbles worn foot and aged buttery smooth in history, each stone perfectly imperfect in the charm of a time when hand and hammer mattered are sentences that, I know only how to say it this way, take up residence in the heart, that forever own a piece of it, that one falls in love with. The description of the village is another such, as is the choosing to lace, Rembrandt, the eating before a slippery slope, the standing taller together - that whole passage - and the pots, the pans and the a cappella. Dulcet hymn, shade of tyne, the azure ocean still more, bounty, perchance and cascading to mention singular words that are sigh-worthy too.
A thing of great beauty, like the Rembrandt, like the poets of yesteryear where writers allowed themselves to be more elaborate in their wording, wonderful times, a thousand times read and it would only show itself with depth and richness. For all the wow expressed here, it is but 5% of just how impressed, astounded and amazed I am, though I have read many a chapter that has had the same effect, at just how beautifully you write. Bliss is here.

Trée said...

Sweetest, sometimes one just has to have the right inspiration. :-)

I write what I feel and as I feel it, I see it. I usually let the feeling flow such that when I start a chapter like this, I have no idea where it is going or for how long--a single paragraph or several. The writing rides on the edge of that present moment feeling, a wave that if not ridden in that moment, is lost never to be ridden or written for that matter. I never know when that wave will come, but I do know that when it does, I'd better ride it, and ride it right then and just ride it for as far as it will take me. What you see here is a wave. And I rode it. :-)

Your comments are my world. How else to say it. :-)

Mona said...

Tree... your fantastic descriptions have the power to take one there... I always admire your excellent talent for such superb rendering & your never ending flow...You play with words with love for each chosen one, its incredible how you do it & with o much fluidity of movement

You are amazing! I mean that!

No I did not tag you... I know with your kind of blog, you would not do a tag.

I did not do a birthday post for you either as I have stopped doing them. I decided that I would go & wish my friends on their respective blogs & in mails or IMs instead. Hope you had a good day & wish & pray that you have a wonderful life ahead of you!

Thanks for your prayers. You can see they worked :)

Trée said...

Mona, you are still on my prayer list. Unlike most things, one can never have too many prayers prayed in furrowed brow and bended knee.

Thank you for the very kind words. I like the freedom of writing each post within the flow of whatever energy is moving within me in that moment. This chapter started as an ode to my dearest Sunshine and just kept going. She inspires me unlike any other.

Thanks again for the birthday wishes. I'm still amazed you remembered. :-)

Constance said...

Such beauty flows from your pen, Tree. I think every post you write could be the subject of an essay in school... I want to live in that world, with the pictures your paint, just for a bit...

Autumn Said it best :)

Trée said...

Annie, come live with me in that world, for who is to say that that world is no less real than the one we imagine to be real. Thank you for your very kind words. Always appreciated. :-)

j said...

" in the charm of time"

I didn't even get through the whole chapter before this phrase captured my imagination. What a wonderful turn of words!

Going back to finish...

Jen

j said...

It was completely lovely. They sound young. Or at least like they feel young when they are together.... Capable of growing old together.

Again, this chapter was completely lovely.

Jen

Trée said...

Jen, your kind words are always welcome. Trev and Em are on the younger side and I suppose the love we see between them is more associated with the young than the old. Why is has to be that way, I don't understand. Still, I'll stop and smell the roses wherever and whenever those roses appear. :-)

Mona said...

Yes, I have never witnessed anyone as loyal as Autumn in the blogdom!

You don't have to be amazed that I remembered :) A seal of friendship ensures that!

Like I feel, Friendship belongs to the temple & not the market place.

snowelf said...

Comparing worn cobblestones to butter...fabulous!! Okay, now I sound like a gum commercial--but seriously--You Are Amazing!! Where ever your analogies come from, I love soaking them in.
Have a fabulous weekend Tree!!

--snow

Trée said...

Thank you Snow. :-)

Hope your weekend has been fantastic.