Friday, October 06, 2006

169. Living Lantern

Zeke lifted his glass in a single fluid motion throwing back the last bit of amber snoot like an old sea captain bailing out his sinking vessel, resigned to going down with his ship. Not one to drink much, a few shots would have normally gone straight to his head, especially since sustenance had neither been wanted nor welcomed. Not tonight. The events of the day and the events to come wrapped his mind in a protective coat of impenetrable soberness as if the darkness of reality filtered the alcohol from his bloodstream before it could work its magic of deception and illusion.

Looking out the cove window, Zeke caught sight of a rare three moonrise as a bitter smile marked the memories of better times and he wondered if even the heavens were mocking him now; putting him in his place as if to say, look now little one. The wind whipped and swirled and he could see the white caps in the cove jostling with the shore like school boys shoving and pushing in line. What was would remain but a memory for the morrow and the fortnight and beyond heralded a page not written even in the imaginations of the great Hynerians of letters.

The night air felt heavy with anticipation of rain and hail and the trees outside the estate swayed and bowed in their own melancholy language as if to say we too are innocent of the crime, yet condemned nonetheless. Zeke took a deep breath of the humid heavy air, his short grey hair looking all the shorter in the brisk coil. His white tunic flapped to its own complaint revealing a musculature of one many years inferior and he felt his eyes, so full of liquid protest just a few minutes before, ache in dryness, their essence stolen by a remorseless gale.

Looking to his left, the sway of a single lantern caught his eye and against brute force his ducts succeeded as mother memory squeezed a drop of juice the child could not manage. Although it had been more than a decade, it seemed just yesterday that he had taught Kyra the art of constructing a living lantern. They had gone out night after night in search of the sea-amines, walking up and down the wet beach, hoping that this would be the night the sea would give up its most rare treasure. Sea-amines were native to the area around the cove, glowed, when in harmony or some would say love, with a porphyrous iridescence, and if properly cared for, could be domesticated. When housed inside a living lantern, their magenta radiance illuminated the porch with a slightly pulsing light.

Soon, thought Zeke, what nature had given, she would reclaim. Yet, still, on one small vessel, somewhere beyond the sable turbulence, a heart beat strong and that heart carried the hope and promise of life beyond this catastrophe. Holding the lantern in his hands, as if to calm the life within such as to calm the life without, Zeke closed his eyes and gently kissed the slightly warm shade. As our fates are destined to cleave not, so our spirit lives on beyond the touch of local disturbance. Kyra, wherever you are, we love you. May Janus be with you my dear child.



Categories: Story, Zeke, Kyra, Hyneria

52 comments:

Autumn Storm said...

So beautiful, I want to cry.

Trée said...

If you do, my shoulder is here and Blunt is ready.

Autumn Storm said...

Brilliantly beautiful writing, again. A relatively short scene, much like John's drive home, yet so rich in detail, imagery, the language both weaves and flows, not sure how you do that, but do that you do. A wonderful chapter.
As said, it sure is good to have you back in the land of blogs. :-)

Trée said...

Good to be back. I sat at my computer all day, engrossed in work with not a scintilla of inspirational mojo for the story. And then, I saw my lantern and I heard the gale and felt the beat of a distant heart and the chapter wrote itself.

As always my dear Sweestest, your kind words are like precious jewels to me. :-)

Autumn Storm said...

and the chapter wrote itself.
:-)
A smile is all I can manage at this stage of the night. Here's another :-) (Bed!) Night, x

Trée said...

Sweet dreams. Wear socks if you don't want Poppet grabbing your toes in a few hours. No sleeping in this morning. We insists. :-D

Autumn Storm said...

Back attcha, those sweet dreams that is. :-)

Kay said...

absolutely beautiful, bbb. just brilliant.

I feel so lucky that we are getting to read this now, before it's printed in book(s), before we have to pay for it.

I, of course, already have a payment plan in mind. :) The only thing on that kitchen table is the sopapilla cheesecake I baked last evening. Literally. :)

Dzeni said...

Great to see you back! Beautiful graphic and story, as always.

Stargazer said...

Wow, wonderfully descriptive! The imagery unfolds with such grace.

Anonymous said...

I like these atmospheric/thought pieces best of all. The flow here is lovely, like a song.

Welcome back Trée, I've missed your beautiful posts, though the hugs kept me going.

Trée said...

Hey Bean, did you see the way I worked "amber" into the liquid cure part of the story. I'm not saying that snoot wasn't amber in tint all along, but not everything is a coincidence. :-D

Hope you are feeling better. Thanks for the very kind words and likewise, glad to have you back reading the story. :-)

Trée said...

Deb, thanks so much for that comment. Although I would like to think the writing is graceful, having written it, and struggled over this word or that, this phrase or that, this paragraph or that, I sometimes wonder if it works at all. Glad to hear you and Wontar had a great time in Vegas. And the images you've been doing lately have been nothing short of spectacular. :-)

Trée said...

Jenni, feels good to be back and good to see you leaving a kind comment. Happy weekend to you. :-)

Trée said...

Hey K, glad to see you made curfew. :-D

As for that book, no worries, I've got a copy or two for you. Just come back to the kitchen to retrieve your copies. I look forward to hand delivering them with loving care and attention. And the cheesecake--so thoughtful. Book signings can work up such an appetite, at least the one I have planned for you. :-D

Trée said...

Afternoon Sunshine. Grab your sweater. I'm in the mood for a long walk to see the sites of a city weeping with the coming goodbye. :-)

Autumn Storm said...

That sounds lovely, seeing the city through new eyes not least. Plenty to see too, the little Mermaid to start I'd suggest and a drink by the lit boats on the river to end. :-)

A happy day to you, sweet pea, x

Trée said...

I'm going grab my gamboling shoes and gladly go for that gander through the golden gates of gratitude and graciousness. So glad you're game. :-D

Autumn Storm said...

:-D
Now say Peter Piper Picked a Peck of Pickled Pepper 3 times in a row.
My, my, I'm impressed - a master of alliteration along with everything else, is there no end to your talents?! (My money is on No) :-)

Trée said...

Just doing my daily tongue exercises. Never know when you might need to put the wet instrument of delight to prolonged use. Be prepared, that's what Poppet says. :-D

Autumn Storm said...

LOL
A smart cookie is our friend! :-)

Trée said...

He's as smooth as the edge of a rainbow, and as colorful at times too. Now bend over, its time for your blessing. :-D

Autumn Storm said...

:-D Be gentle with me.

Christa said...

Beautiful fractal as always :D

Just poppin in to make sure yer alive and well :)

Trée said...

Christa, I think I'm still okay but if that status changes I'll let you know. :-D

As always, thanks for the kind words.

Trée said...

Sunshine, gentle wasn't the first word that came to mind. :-D

Anonymous said...

I always notice when something is Amber, especially when that something is liquid ;)

I get a little thrill every time I listen to "my" song which includes the lyric "I'm tasting Amber".

Ok. I need a spanking for my self-absorption now.

Trée said...

Bean, in these here parts, we would call that a "blessing of the hide." :-D

If you need some help with your "blessing" I've been known to produce satisfactory results. Now on your knees like a catholic school girl and wear some plaid if you got it--pleated skirt with white blouse would get you a private session at no extra charge. :-D

Autumn Storm said...

Sweet dreams when you get that far. :-)

Autumn Storm said...

& good morning. When you get that far. :-D

Trée said...

Why thank you my dear Sunshine. Is your soul in tune? Poppet wants to know. :-)

Trée said...

Poppet wants to know if this sounds familar:

I don't mind where you come from
As long as you come to me
I don't like illusions I can't see
Them clearly

I don't care no I wouldn't dare
To fix the twist in you
You've shown me eventually
What you'll do

I don't mind...
I don't care...
As long as you're here

Go ahead tell me you'll leave again
You'll just come back running
Holding your scarred heart in hand
It's all the same
And I'll take you for who you are
If you take me for everything
Do it all over again
It's all the same

Hours slide and days go by
Till you decide to come
And in between it always seems too long
All of a sudden

And I have the skill, yeah I have the will
To breathe you in while I can
However long you stay
Is all that I am

I don't mind...
I don't care...
As long as you're here

Go ahead tell me you'll leave again
You'll just come back running
Holding your scarred heart in hand
It's all the same
And I'll take you for who you are
If you take me for everything
Do it all over again
It's always the same

Wrong or right
Black or white
If I close my eyes
It's all the same

In my life
The compromise
I close my eyes
It's all the same

Go ahead say it you're leaving
You'll just come back running
Holding your scarred heart in hand
It's all the same
And I'll take you for who you are
If you take me for everything
Do it all over again
It's all the same

Trée said...

:-)

:-)

:-)

:-)


See what you do. Smiles all around here this morning.

Autumn Storm said...

yey, now I can sing even louder, completely sure of the words!

You know, to see you do this--> :-), makes me do this --> :-D, so thanks for that.

Happy Sunday, poppet, x

Trée said...

Mission accomplished. Well, part of the mission anyway. Did you know that souls know not the hesitation of distance? Its true--Sweet Pea swears it is. :-)

Autumn Storm said...

Well, if Sweet Pea says it's so, that's good enough for me. :-)

Trée said...

As I once heard someone say, Abso-f***ing-lutely! :-D

Autumn Storm said...

Thank you most kindly! - That was a real special gift, much appreciated. :-)
Merry Christmas, hot stuff, x

Trée said...

Merry Christmas Darlin'. :-)

Trée said...

Meg, I was thinking that might be on a pay per view basis. What's it worth to you? :-D

Or perhaps it could be part of a friendly wager since you seem to be in the betting mood. :-)

Trée said...

Meg, I'm one step ahead of you. I've discovered VideoCall, which is a service where you can do a video phone call from your computer. The image is very sharp and the voice sound is excellent. And you're right, it is fun at another level. :-D

Trée said...

Well, I am a webcam virgin, seeing as all and such I just got mine a couple days ago, so I'm sure there are a few things you could teach me, or is that, show me. :-D

Trée said...

Well heeded my friend. I paid too much for my monitors to risk getting them soiled. :-D

Trée said...

:-D

I'll let my nether regions know the high opinion you have of them. They will be quite excited at the news. :-D

Autumn Storm said...

Still a virgin, I wonder. LOL

Wanted to ask you if you had done any more of these?

Trée said...

Sunshine, I haven't. I think in part because I'm not crazy about my own image and in part because the last few audio pieces I did, nobody listened, so I question if the time and effort to add one more piece to a post is worth it (right now when I post a chapter this is what goes into it: (1) create the image; (2) write the post; (3) post the image and prose to DT; (4) link all the categories to del.icio.us; (5) upload the image to the Web Album and copy a snippet; (6) upload the photo to Photobucket (for WP); (7) copy entire post for posting on WordPress; (8) copy chapter to the single Word document for safe keeping and to have the story in a single file.)

Having said that, if I thought I had something important to say as commentary and I felt readers really would be interested, I'd be happy to do it. As it is, I think you are the only one with your teeth in the story, and we chat so much about what is happening I don't feel you are missing anything that would be in a video posting.

Give me your thoughts.

Autumn Storm said...

I got tired just reading that. Seriously, I want you to know that I realize how much effort along with everything else you put into this blog/story and I for one can only applaud and thank you for the gift of it all. I can also understand the audio argument, however I asked since you seemed excited by the prospect of doing a few when you first got the webcam, and also, for the simple reason that personally I should like very much to hear you read and comment, well, in truth on all of your chapters. :-D
Here's what I think, I think you do not only enough but far more than enough in relation to feedback, so unless you are overcome with the desire to do one on a particularly important post, then there is no need to put another number on that list.
I thank you again for this one (and the other readings) though, was so very nice to see and hear you read

Trée said...

Sweetest, we will see some video, perhaps when I get back from my trip. Who knows, maybe this is just the thing to get people involved. If nothing else, I would do it for you. Sweet dreams when you get that far. :-)

Autumn Storm said...

Always within the pages of this blog, and extra specially here. xo

Autumn Storm said...

Before I continue onto the chapters up ahead, and a quick glance at the page reminds me of the exquisite treats that are (always) waiting there, I just wanted to attempt to verbalize the wow that resonates within.

In those most breathtaking of moments in life when one is never more aware of how mere words couldn't hope to capture the enormity of sensation and sentiment, one can usually rely on other forms of communication. Reading, and I'm only about half-way thus far, The Story again, means acknowledging again that a million genuinely awe-struck comments will never quite succeed in their fervent desire to explain just how touched I have been by it, just how adept you are at setting a scene, creating ambience, just how deeply the characters of this story have burrowed as we have watched them live and breathe.
I know it is just a story, one blog, one person behind it and as such it may sound a little dramatic but I don't really care. Your blog has been a great gift these past couple of years, before the story too, the story is but an expression of the person who created it on the one hand and a living, breathing entity on the other, it reminds me as times change and the faces of some change, blogs, people, of why I make the smart choice when I spend part of the time that is wholly mine here in what is known as the virtual world. :-)
Searching for the meaningful, the path to elevation, that state of profound wonder at what is present, to be challenged, to reach, to delve, to explore, life at it's best, and the amazing fact is your story (and your posts before that) are opportunities to do so and at the same time to luxuriate in the beauty that is your writing as a whole. We are all familiar with there sometimes there being a song or a book, a film, a poem, a picture, a view, a thought, or most wonderfully a person and the affinity, the touch, hits a spot that only the rarest of encounters can. It's pureness, it's honesty, it's knowingness and recognition, it's actually having the circles that unite us all in plain sight. There aren't words to explain what it is like, nor is it necessary to for anyone who has, watching (e.g.) Von kneel and wrap those words around his chest, watching Yul watching Rog as he held her on the bathroom floor, watching Papa and Kyra, watching Papa embrace Von, listening to Rog and Von over snoot, watching Mairi as she cradled Trev, Kyra as she lay crumpled, watching, hearing each of them when alone. It is complete appreciation and thankfulness of every tear and every smile and every frown and every giggle (etc), of every thought and emotion and question and light of understanding (one hopes) that your writing and images have caused that would not have existed otherwise. It is the opportunity to not just be wowed by the beauty of the writing, of the images, it is falling for so many characters and feeling one's heart swell because of them. Fictional, real, doesn't matter, song, book, view, person, a story on a blog about Hynerians, all the same, for the same reason looking at M makes for tearful smiles, for the same reason I can listen to a JB track a dozen times consecutively and listen again in wonder, this is the reason why I'll always consider it my extreme good fortune that I have been able to follow this story this far, as for as long as you keep writing it.
Some have left, many have come, then as now people have loved your writing, your characters, anyone reading it all would love The Story as much as I do, so not kind, not dramatic though I might sound it, but truth. In short, thanks again for sharing your gift. :-)

Trée said...

Sweetest, soon I hope I have time to reply, to express just what your comments have meant and mean to me. I might need to write a chapter as metaphor, for what I feel for you and your comments is very similar to what Von feels for Ceru and the book of letters. Perhaps, maybe, I should let Von said what I've tried to say. Got to run back to another meeting and so I must end this comment almost before I've started it. I think we might see a Von's Journal chapter soon (not the one I'm talking about above by the way) before we move on to the Tom and John chapters.

Thank you for your comments. They mean more to me than I know how to say.

Love,

Poppet

Autumn Storm said...

A thumbs up is plenty and this was that. :-) Very much looking forward to another Journal chapter (those have been clear favourites too) and the John/Tom developments!
Have a good rest of your day, x