“Dearest Kyra, should I wake Trev and escort him in?”
“Yes Goldie. Oh, and Goldie,” Kyra winked, “uhm, be gentle this time, will ya.”
Goldie batted her eyes in mock innocence just like grandma used to do. How papa had captured so many of grandma’s traits in a robot never ceased to amaze. Then again, papa himself was one of a kind. So much love, so much patience, so much understanding. Kyra hadn’t met 10 Hynerians that together could have matched the capacities of her grandfather.
Twirling papa’s blue onyx ring between her fingers, Kyra moved across the room as only she could. Her gait, remarked by so many, flowed effortlessly. Her tight and taut body spoke of strength beyond her slight frame, but her gait, oh that walk, both intoxicated and soothed simultaneously.
As with most things, Kyra learned to walk from papa. Not to walk, but to walk. “There’s a difference,” he would always say. “Kyra, few really walk. Most pound the ground with their busyness, their rush to be someplace other than where they are. They live their life in anticipation, forever thinking,” and with the word thinking his eyes would widen as if the word itself carried some special significance, “forever thinking that life would be better over there.” And with that papa would look all around him as if there really was a “there” and then would shrug his shoulders when “there” was nowhere to be found.
“Where is there Kyra?” papa asked. And she would point to some place down the beach. They walked to there and papa would ask again with a grin. “Are we there Kyra?
“Yes papa, we are . . . here.”
“But is here the same as there,” he asked.
She smiled, “No papa here is here and here is not there.”
“Look behind you child.” Kyra glanced down the beach from whence they had come. “Tell me what you see.”
“I see the sand and the water papa,” Kyra responded not at all certain anymore that her eyes saw what papa saw.
“Look again my sweet young jewel, look closely, and tell me what you see.”
Kyra looked again. A wrinkle formed between her eyebrows in determined concentration. Papa had taught her to break down a situation into its smallest parts. “We climb mountains the same way as stairs,” he preached, “one step at a time.”
She started with the ocean. Nothing unusual there. Her eyes moved to the sand. Again, looked perfectly normal. But there must be something she thought. Papa saw something she didn’t and she refused to miss the point. Kyra was nothing if not determined.
“Focus on the facts Kyra. Focus on what you know.”
She thought aloud, “We were there and now we are here.” And then a smile of wonder emerged. “We. Me and you papa! Me and you makes two. Yet I only see one set of prints in the sand and those prints are mine papa. How is that possible?”
“Kyra, my dear sweet child, walk with anticipation and the heaviness of those thoughts will not be forgotten by the lives you crush underfoot. Walk to be, to be here and only here and you walk with lightness and you walk with peace. Would you like to learn to walk my dear sweet Kyra?”
“Yes, papa. Please teach me to walk,” Kyra shouted as she jumped with delight into her papa’s arms.
The door to Kyra’s quarters swooshed open.
“Come in Trev, can I get you anything,” said Kyra.
“No time, take a look at this report on Kieran. It appears the Golden Tree soup is not working. If this data is accurate, he has less than forty-eight hours.”
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31 comments:
just wonderful Trée! well worth the wait :0)
This chapter is just fab, love the story of papa and Kyra on the beach, it is excellent! and of course another great cliffhanger :0)
The commentary is such a wonderful addition to the story as always(and how could I not love it, you referenced one of tubey girl's favorite science geeks!)
Absolutely love the frac!
Oh Trace, you always make me feel so special. I know I butchered Richard's last name but I'm so please you still knew who I was talking about. I've missed Kyra sooooo much. Now I need to see my baby walk. I hope she can live up to my expectations. LMAO
And how was your day darlin tubey girl? :-)
my day was all kinds of sunshiny LOL (thanks for asking!)
I'm exhausted and the paperwork is gonna kill me but god I love what I am doing :0)
I know you had a busy day, but hopefully you are having a great evening!
again, great job on the story, the commentary and the frac, you are good darlin, very very good :0)
I've missed Kyra sooooo much
ROFL I just bet you have ;0)
Check out Trebuchet in a couple minutes. I just created a couple of moons that sooner or later Kyra is gonna see. We just got our first light dusting of snow. Awww, where has it been? :-D
y'all don't get snow much do you? I have had about enough of it now, in fact I have had about enough of this weather, it needs to just pick spring or winter and stay there LOL
I'll head over there presently and see what ya got :0) can't wait!
LMAO! No, we don't get much. I'm sure this dusting has caused a major run on milk and bread not to mention long lines at the gas stations. :-D
Kieran, btw, might just be the man. Well see how she reacts to his impending doom. :-)
LOL ooooh can't wait ;0)
Me too! K & K sitting in a tree . . . :-D
ROFLMAO :0D
Nicely written Darlin'... And (READ!) Obviously you finally got some rest last night! ;-)
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Great to see you back. Thanks for another wonderful installment. As usual, can't wait to see what happens next!
Yey, a fix! Worth the wait! Can't stop, must listen to audio....:-)
(Thumbs up) Nicely done :-)
good morning sweetie :0)
hope you have a great wednesday!
(hugs)
Ah, very interesting. Do I detect a bit of zen practice in that chapter?
Personally I think the sexiest walk is one full of confidence. In fact, you can tell a great deal about a person just from their walk, can't you?
I read about your snow. OMG how I wanted snow this year. Instead we've had a 73 degree winter and lots of brushfires.
Sigh. I'm ready for spring now. LOL
Love to you dear.
Very well written and I enjoyed hearing the commentary. I didn't think of it before (too much) but a huge part of a person's presence is how he/she carry themself.
Great frac too!
Happy Hump Day to you and Jack LOL *HUGS*
Karen, they say we form a first impression in the first 12 seconds we meet a person. Many times, that impression, good or bad, is based on sight, what we see. How a person moves does not lie. Words may deceive but body language seldom does. Kyra walks with peace and with a "I could f*** your balls off if I wanted to but I don't" attitude. You know, with every sentence I write about her I think I fall more in love with this character. And so does Jack. :-D
Aggie, you will see alot of Zen in this story. Here, Now, Just this. Much of what I write could be seen as notes to myself. Reminders of what I know but do not always live.
There are parts of Kyra that are inspired by you dear. I leave it to you to figure out which parts those are. :-D
Is love all ya got fur moi? A man can't live just on love. How does the song go, "A little less talk . . ." LMAO
Have a great day Aggie. So good to see you commenting again darlin'.
Mornin' Trace. Full work day scheduled, but I'm determined sometime before midnight to keep the ball rolling on this story. Sun is out this morning and there is a light coat of white stuff on all the trees. Go get'em tubey. :-)
Thanks Sunshine. Is that one thumbs up or two? ;-)
Sending good karma your way today. A little bird said I should keep you in my thoughts. Hugs and kisses my dearest sweet one.
Thanks Jenni. I think I was as anxious to get this story moving again as anyone. I even felt a tiny bit of fear that that was it, that I was done. I suppose one day that will be true but I think we are a long way from that. Thanks for the kind words sweetie.
Y, there is a major difference between 3 dogs and 4--LMAO!
Yes, two good nights in a row does wonders. Now if I didn't have this job and bills to pay I could really get some work done on this blog and elsewhere. Try to stay dry darlin'. Grandma Kyra always said you'd catch cold if you go outside all wet. ;-)
I was enrapt and totally taken by the turns in the story. Tree I don't know where you get off thinking you can't write. I love your imagination and your feelings for the characters . . . and like Trace says oooh those cliffhangers.
You already know I love the fracs.
Liz, your kind words are like sunshine on my skin--makes me warm and happy all over. The images and the story, like the brooch that papa made, come from joy and love. I just love the characters. I've fallen in love with Kyra and that love grows with every detail I uncover about who she is. And Zeke, well, Zeke is the mentor in my life. The two together teach and educate me and I live for what they will say next. I do not see myself as either a writer or an artist but simply a the vehicle that love and passion is using to manifest what is in my heart. Creating the images and writing the story makes me feel alive. It's not work, it's just the expression of love and joy. If that manifestation of love and joy makes others think I can write and create, who am I to argue. But when I sit down, the last thing on my mind is writing or creating. I just want to see beauty, touch peace, and breathe love into Kyra and Zeke.
Liz, thanks again for your kind words. You know I admire your writing beyond my ability to properly express in words. I always read your posts at least twice. First time just to read. The second, to marvel at how you have written.
Thanks Darlin'! I'll remember that. ;-)
good morning sweetie :0)
hope you have a great Thursday (hugs)
Reminders of what I know but do not always live.
Amen. Some deep part of me is trying to get back there.
A man can't live just on love. Don't I know it? LOL
How does the song go, "A little less talk . . ."
Ahh...Elvis. :)~
Just you trust that there's plenty of action...mostly in my head though. LOL Don't you worry. I know where to find you. And I prefer kitchen tables. (snicker)
Aggie, what can I say. You are one of a kind darlin'. You bring smiles to my face I never knew I had. I'll keep the coffee warm. :-)
You're right about the first 12 seconds.
It's a healthy obsession for you and Jack LOL I do see her as that type of person too, but she's not a threat to me. You know, how some women like that make other women feel less?
Hi Tree! Welcome back. Sorry I've been away for a bit.
This image reminds of a kaleidoscope I had as a child. Happy memories...
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