Thursday, July 02, 2009

the peace of war

editor: your work is too wordy

tolstoy: really

editor: and too long

tolstoy: wow

editor: yeah, no one will ever publish this

tolstoy: too long and wordy huh

editor: and if they did, no one would ever read it

tolstoy: any advice

editor: find another line of work, forget this nonsense

tolstoy: okay

editor: no problem. you just ain't got it, not your fault

tolstoy: yeah

editor: hey

tolstoy: what

editor: hold your head up, writing is not for everyone

tolstoy: (looking up) I suppose the same could be said for editing

18 comments:

gerry boyd said...

Lol. Bravo!

Trée said...

Thanks Gerry. A toast to all the editors out there. :-D

Leslie Morgan said...

"Wait, work with me here - we could cut it in half and put it out in Cliff Notes form. Of course, we wouldn't pay royalties at the same rate."

Trée said...

Spoken like a true editor. They mean well but their job is impossible. You know what? I think I need a lime in my house. Right now I have none and the poverty is killing my soul. :-D

Leslie Morgan said...

Key limes are best!

Trée said...

Limes are key to a full and happy life. A lime a day, so they say, upon the light and upon the hay, will keep at bay, as we lay, the demons of the day. :-D

Got lime?

Leslie Morgan said...

Pretty funny! I want the T-shirt.

Trée said...

You get the T-shirts made and I'll give the rights to the quote. 50/50. :-)

Leslie Morgan said...

Got that entrepreneurial spirit! You know I love that stuff.

Trée said...

Oooooh, we can make more than just money. I say we start with the agave. :-D

Leslie Morgan said...

Now you're talkin'! I've got the LaBelle Orange.

Trée said...

Lime, you are the woman. Unplug the phone and lock the door. We got a business plan to write. :-D

Leslie Morgan said...

Oh, my HELL! After my day job, I went to do a SIDE job meeting for 1 1/2 hours. I'm now cutting the limes, getting the squeezer, LaBelle and Sotol on the counter. I'm sure our virtual "take a meeting" would have been far more pleasant. " . . . a business plan to write . . ." I've got 'sperience! But for now, stick a fork in me. I'm done. I need about 10 miles on my legs and a full night's sleep before I return to work in 11 hours. You do the math!

Trée said...

Sounds to me like the lime needs as much squeezing as those limes. :-D

Leslie Morgan said...

Oh my HELL - you're killin' me AND makin' me laugh, and I DO like to laugh!

Tennessee - help me please: 2 hours difference?

Trée said...

On CST here. If you are PST, we be two hours apart in the sadness of geography, two souls, three or four limes, and one night. What say you? :-D

snowelf said...

This is so awesome. Especially sweet because my 8th grade English teacher told me to give up writing.
Now that I am older, I see why, but I think she seriously underestimated my passion and potential and eagerness to learn how.

hugs to you, Tree!

--snow

Trée said...

Snow, I was told the same thing in college. Didn't write a sentence of fiction for more than twenty years. I still have no idea if what I write is any good but I do love the process. And, of course, I love the comments, the connection, the interaction. Thanks for stopping by. Happy 4th!