Thursday, February 07, 2008

451. Something



The Hood entered the sweating dank cell, alone. Huddled in the far corner was Calfuray.

"I understand you know something of the female hynerian."

19 comments:

  1. The image is The Hood's eye as seen by a cowering Calfuray.

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  2. Ominous! I love how you can create a terrifying atmosphere with just one line of text.

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  3. Agree completely with Jenny, lip-biting stuff!

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  4. YAY! I knew that eye was sinister. Your spare words reveal so much about Hood. Lovely job.

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  5. The imagery looks like a martial arts throwing star, very dangerous in the right, or maybe even wrong, hands. Ok, just dangerous period.

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  6. Jenni, I seem to have forgotten how to write more than a paragraph or two. :-D

    Thanks for the kind words, always appreciated. :-)

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  7. Sweetest and Flipping, thank you both. This is one of those chapters where an entire scene played out on the frame of three sentences. At least in my mind it did. :-D

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  8. Thank you Wamblings. Still working on that canopy for you. ;-)

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  9. Jennifer, as soon as I saw this image, I knew it was The Hood. Just took a little time to figure out how to use it. :-D

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  10. A burst of energy from within... I failed to see any danger, but I agree with one of the comments. I see a martial arts star now.

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  11. I bet the Hood has a HUGE cock.

    I can tell by looking in his eyes.

    I'm completely smitten.

    He probably dresses cool too.

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  12. Strumper, who said he has just one?

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  13. Cléa, I need to examine this image again. I saw the iris of The Hood so clearly, I've not been able to see anything else. Mmmmm . . .

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  14. Oh, My God.

    DP from all in one man?

    Can I put in to be the Hood's Frailtoy?

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  15. And, maybe, they operate both independently and in unison with one a little bigger than the other. :-D

    I'll let The Hood know of your request. You might not be the first. :-D

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  16. I kind of figure he's the type of dude with a harem.

    I don't mind.

    As long as all the frailtoys sleep in the same quarters.

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  17. The Hood with a harem. Now that is frailing funny! :-D

    Need to go dry my eyes now. :-D

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  18. I'd like to see that. :-D

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Engaged comments on any aspect of the chapter are welcomed and encouraged.