Friday, June 26, 2009

a pebble tossed



a pebble tossed
a clear day
a cold lake

no skip
just a drop
a plop

falling
sinking
quietly

to join
the others
pebbles all

once tossed
by lovers
loveless

this seabed
of hearts
forever silenced

under glass
blue
as the sky
at

8 comments:

  1. Leslie Morgan6/26/2009 10:54:00 PM

    Too silent, too long. Thank you for resurfacing! Lovers loveless, indeed.

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  2. Trée6/26/2009 10:57:00 PM

    Oh Lime, if I were a fireplace, you'd be the wood. :-)

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  3. Leslie Morgan6/26/2009 11:08:00 PM

    Come on, baby, light my fire . . to coin a phrase. I was concerned and sad . . glad you're back on. Just home from the 2 hour massage. She beat the holy hell out of me. I feel GOOD! I'm so glad you're back. I kept going to the well . . .

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  4. gerry boyd6/27/2009 08:22:00 AM

    Bravo!

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  5. Trée6/27/2009 09:14:00 AM

    Lime, it is always good to be missed. :-)

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  6. Trée6/27/2009 09:14:00 AM

    Thanks Gerry.

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  7. Autumn6/28/2009 04:44:00 PM

    Magnificent poem! Full of whispers, suggestive and expressive, it could so it seems support several proposals regarding meaning. Beautiful language, lovers loveless...
    this seabed
    of hearts
    forever silenced    , exquisite, final.

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  8. Trée6/28/2009 08:00:00 PM

    Thank you my dear sweetest one. :-)

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