Saturday, November 26, 2005

1. Caribbean Canopy


Warm breeze milks stress from the mind like experienced nimble fingers upon a taut muscle. Humid salt air wafts in from the southern Caribbean with each crashing wave upon the velvet clay textured beach. Riches untold within and out, overpowering the senses, seductive and dreamlike. Our bungalow, deep in the jungle awaits our weary spirits. Come inside the magnificent, mystical canopy. Promise, you won't mind the ride. Me and you, one island, one union, one time. Warm, wet, sweaty, intoxicatingly bewitching. Breathe. Just breathe. Now. With me. As us. As one.

Can you hear it. The surf darlin'. A crescendo matching the intensity shining in our eyes, the beat of our hearts. Can you hear it. My love dear. Hear it in my eyes, see it in my touch, feel it in my whispers. Let me hold your hands and gaze into the liquid of your soul. Open yourself, open to me, open to us. Walk to the cliff. Feel the breeze that only lovers feel. Come to the edge with me.

My hand caresses your cheek warmed by the day's sun. At the speed of light, still took more than eight minutes to travel from source to you and in this moment, to my hand. Millions of miles of warmth, from you to me, in this moment, the sun, you and me, as one sensation of warmth and love. What are you, who am I, where is the sun if not embodied in the pulse of our touch.

Talk to me sweetness. Utter the words I long to hear, words born of pure intent, sacrificed at the alter of passion, profound in their direct simplicity. Tickle my ears with a symphony of she-devilish delectation. Swoon with the musical flow of two hearts in tune. Fear not the fall, what my arms might miss, my heart will catch.


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  1. oh my, oh my and oh freakin my :0)

    Fear not the fall, what my arms might miss, my heart will catch.


    and did I say oh my, I think I need some air, cause darlin it just went straight to blazing in here :0)

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  2. oh and I love the pic :0) caribbean colors, the colors of my dreams, somebody book me a flight I need to get myself to the beach LOL

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  3. I seem to be having trouble typing LOL Lord have mercy, did I say oh my yet LOL

    I think I have to go out on the balcony for a few minutes LOL, I seem to be having a small temperature control problem, I think you crawled in my fantasies and stole that one LOL :0)

    2 tickets to paradise coming up :0)

    so Trée, how was your day :0)

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  4. Heaven knocked on my door and said it had my name for a jounney to paradise--one way too--lol.

    I've had a kickass kinda of day Trace. How bout you?

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  5. Trace, are you okay. Do I need to explain anything to your mom? LMAO

    Oh, and did you find that red cowboy hat?

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  6. Hey, come back. It's not my fault. Blame Holly. She's the beotch that started this. :-)

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  7. ROFL I'm good,I think my breathing and heart rate have stablized for the moment :0) and no I think there are certain things we really don't need to share with my mom LOL

    I had a most excellent day, got all my shopping done and then some :0)

    I bought several fun things for myself, and you know that hat was at the top of my list ;0)

    glad to hear you had such a good day :0)


    oh and did I mention "oh my" yet LOL damn Trée, that is some seriously hot stuff :0)

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  8. and blaming Holly is sooooo not on my list of things to do, I already told you how I feel about you writing the stuff with the pictures :0)

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  9. Well dear, seems you are in the wrong city tonight. ;-)

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  10. Just trying to please a couple of weary feet. :-)

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  11. if that isn't the truth I don't know what is LOL

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  12. oh darlin, you did, you definitely did :0)

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  13. Lay down hon, and let me massage the stress from those hard working arches. I'll prepare the bubble bath and get the champagne ready.

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  14. Darlin' it might be Saturday night, but I'm easy like a Sunday morning. Limited time only. No rain checks.

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  15. Trée, that sounds like heaven right now, on or off a beach :0)

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  16. I'm easy like a Sunday morning. Limited time only. No rain checks.


    there you go again, messing with my breathing LOL

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  17. I wouldn't do it if I didn't know your medical background. Put those nursing skills to use. Heal thyself woman.

    Now put that red cowboy hat on, and get thee in the bubble bath.

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  18. well in my professional nursing opinion:

    seems you are in the wrong city tonight.
    :0)

    now where is that hat, oh here it is, now point me to the tub dear, I am so ready to ease these tired muscles :0)

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  19. Soak those commercial bones and ease the westernness from your bones, cause I have plans to take you east in ways you never imagined. :-)

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  20. there goes the breathing again :0)

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  21. I think we need to enroll you in some yoga classes. Breathing seems to be an issue. LMAO

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  22. ROFL sweetie I do yoga 3 times a week, it doesn't seem to be helping, my breathing anyway, does tend to make one rather bendy though LOL

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  23. ok that was bad, I really shouldn't drink wine with dinner, just makes the most interesting things come out of my mouth LOL

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  24. Make sure the bath is warm. Soak well my dear, I need you as flexible as can be. Eastern methods demand a physicality few western woman are capable of performing. I accept no excuses. Do or do not. Are you willing to enter the realm of no return?

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  25. Taking notes . . . ply Trace with wine . . . okay, what were you saying? :-)

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  26. So very romantic! Yep, wishing I was there.....

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  27. Me too Sherri. I'd make sure there were plenty of carrots too. :-)

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  28. Are you willing to enter the realm of no return?


    with you as my guide? without hesitation darlin :0)


    oh and I prefer Chardonnay :0)

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  29. oh and I prefer Chardonnay

    duly noted. I'm all about the end result. How we get there is mere details. :-D

    You can insert my {quaidesque} smile here.

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  30. would that also include 'special carrots'? :D

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  31. Sherri, why yes, I have one very special carrot in reserve just for my northern exiled bunny. Keeping it warm just for you babe. ;-)

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  32. {quaidesque} smile

    and you wonder why I have breathing and heart rate problems mr. educated southern :0) LOL

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  33. Hey, I spent ten years educating this southern voice on LSU's campus. I expect some return on that investment. LMAO

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  34. it was time well spent darlin :0) I'm sure as hell not complaing LOL

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  35. How well can you control your breathing? Need to know how far I can push the envelope, so to speak. Don't want to be loaded for bear if I'm hunting rabbit. :-)

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  36. mmmmm..... (licking lips) Thinking about those carrots.

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  37. sweetheart I have been singing since I was 6 years old, I have excellent breath control :0)


    Don't want to be loaded for bear if I'm hunting rabbit. ROFL now that is a saying ;0)

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  38. Sherri, hon, are you teasing me now. It is Saturday night you know. My carrot can be ready at a moments notice. :-)

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  39. Trace, just making sure that voice like warm honey is still intact. I don't believe in false advertising. lol

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  40. oh the voice is good as always, just all kinds of warm and flowing :0) LOL

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  41. Warm honey from above and below, what more could a cowboy desire. Tight and taut and not know too much--lol--my favorite line from taxi cab confessions. Oh my, now I'm LMAO!

    Trace, are you tight and taut and not know too much--major big league grin here. :-D

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  42. Next dance it up. Are you with me babe?

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  43. tight and taut and not know too much ROFL I can honestly say I have never been asked that before :0)

    hmmmmm now how to answer that one LOL I think I need more wine :0)

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  44. Are you with me babe?


    just lead the way :0)

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  45. Take your time hon. I'm a patient man. :-)

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  46. oh and Trée, go over and see Aggie, something has come up and I think she can use the support

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  47. Take your time hon. I'm a patient man.

    LOL :0) (still avoiding answering question....not sure I wanna touch that one)

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  48. On my way :0)

    a nice healthy dose of Trée is always a good thing :0)

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  49. Nite Trace. Sweet dreams within the canopy of our imaginations.

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  50. Trée, as hot as the Caribbean :-)!
    Your choice of words are completely evocative, and the fractal is stunning, perfectly, makes me want to have a long, tall, Jamaican rum mix with a colourful umbrella and a ton of ice cubes.

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  51. Stunning. I know I'm getting repetitive, but your images truly are stunning, and your words beautiful.

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  52. Just back for a little more heat ;) - gets better everytime I read it.

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  53. good morning Trée, hope you slept well and have a great day!

    I had sweet dreams of tropical paradise last nite.....:0)

    getting ready to pack up the puter to head home but wanted to stop by and say hey

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  54. Always good to have a little Sunshine with my coffee. You're saving me a lot of money on sugar sweetie. :-)

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  55. Trace, travel safe and we will see you later. Glad to be of help in the dream department. :-)

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  56. stargazer, such wonderful words to awaken to this morning. Feel free to leave such comments anytime. :-)

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  57. Wooo... is it hot in here or is it you? Ever think about writing romance? Wow.

    I was totally caught up in that, thanks for the journey...

    Have a great day! *hugs*

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  58. Karen, if this is what it takes to make women hot, then I wasted a lot of time in college doing the wrong things--lol. Thanks for your kind words sweetie. Have a great Sunday. :-)

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  59. that's so pretty, the words and the picture.
    i haven't talked to you in a while, how was the phoenix trip?

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  60. k, Phoenix was a productive trip. I used to love to travel and the older I get the less and less I enjoy going on the road for business so I was very happy to get back home.

    Thanks for your sweet comments. :-)

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  61. That was so romantic Tree:)

    Actually i cannot decide whether your posts and pics are more interesting and exciting to read or the comments section.

    Still figuring it out..:)

    I loved what you wrote, and i sat here staring at the screen wondering how to comment.

    I guess i'll just say 'i loved it'.

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  62. anu, lol, my comments can sometimes be more interesting than the actual posting. I love to be playful and love to flirt. I've always felt the imagination was and is the greatest of our sexual gifts.

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  63. Wow how i love the way you said that i love to flirt.

    So simple and innocent you sounded.

    Tree you are such an adorable teenager at heart :)

    Sex is all about imagination, respect and trust, and if there is love in it then oooooOOOOOOOOO;-)

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  64. "So simple and innocent you sounded."

    That's me. Well, the simple part for sure. Jury is still out on the innocent part. :-)

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  65. Beautiful romantic post..I think most men don't even have a clue how to, nor want to be romantic anymore..in this fast paced life of ours all they want to do is "get it on" "wham bam"..thats it..sad but true. I guess I got spoiled having such great romance and tenderness in my life for about 15 years than losing it..at least I have the wonderful memories.

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  66. Rhi, thanks again for offering me such warm words of encouragement. You must have some wonderful memories to treasure for a lifetime. One never knows what tomorrow will bring. Perhaps, that experience was just the opening chapter in your book of romance. :-)

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  67. Oh Tree forgot to say this is just the most beautiful fracture..think I like this one the most of all that I've seen.

    Blessings,

    Rhi

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  68. :-)

    Why thank you my dear sweet woman. I find the colors and shadows in this one just plain seductive. It certainly seduced me into writing the prose to accompany it to the blog. :-)

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  69. This one is intoxicating. I simply can't say again how happy I am to have found another fractal blogger. Not only that, but one who produces some quality images!

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  70. Stacey, thanks for those sweet words. Much appreciated. Your work is very impressive and I hope a lot of folks discover what you are doing on Fractal Rock.

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  71. From the first (retrieving comments).

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  72. From the second (retrieving comments)

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